thanks

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asshole.
If you'r gona rate the song a 1, then WTF are you even doing on here...
You could atleast give some constructive crit.

First and foremost, thanks a lot for the compliments and taking the time to review this. Rhyme dictionary? I don't think that even exists so I don't know where you got that from.

As for those lines that you pointed out well I talked to Burly since I don't want to get my interpretation of it mixed up with his actual meaning. Now remember that poetry in itself is hard to interpret because only the person that wrote it will completely understand but it's always interesting for the writer to see how other people interpret it, which is how we feel as well ;) According to Burly:

"all physical diminishes your contingence malicious
the sickness the entrance infectious hate delicious
when you taste the vengeance"

- means that you physically disappear becoming addicted to vengeance (vengeance here is the infection or sickness.) The word infectious in "infectious hate" is an adjective so it's like saying that the infectious hate is delicious when it tastes the vengeance if you want to be more literal.

A lot of people think they're going to enjoy getting revenge on someone but then regret it after doing it, in a sense it's similar to what Burly says but don't quote me on that.

We look at everything we write and make sure that we're not writing things that don't make sense so before you start questioning something, I would appreciate it if you would be less arrogant about it. Again, thanks a lot for the review so if you have anything else you're curious about, just PM me. Stay up.

~Ya boy DeX~

Thanks Chaz. As long as people like what I (we) do, I (we) will carry on making music. lol