Nice
Hey guys, I really like your shit, full of energy. I also like the opening track on your Mutiny album but I think it got repetive after that, I was listening to it and everything sounded kinda the same. I think if you differentiated in your tracks a little you'd be great!
This song is freakin' awesome though, and look forward to the new album
Sounds
Alot like Bad Religion. Not bad guys.
Mike Shinoda
Has a lot to answer for. Look it up.
Needs loads more work
You got the basical melody there, but the variation in pitch on the (awful) drums wasn't very good either. It needs a heavy kick and some snare, some more variation and a bigger build up. Saying that, you have the basics laid out. Good luck.
>.<
Many people told me they loved the drums.
Damn, i put a lot of work in that xD.
Perhaps it wasn't your taste then.
Awesome
Loving the guitar bit and the "Printer is Jammed" part.
thanks
Nice
Bit Robert Miles-y
Sorry dude.
This is probably the worst correlation of random notes I've ever heard put together. Fail. Epically.
......
asshole.
If you'r gona rate the song a 1, then WTF are you even doing on here...
You could atleast give some constructive crit.
Nice
Cool 8 bit loop, flows well dude
Nice production
The track is really well produced and you guys have a great flow, but the lyrics are seriously in need of work. It's like you looked up a rhymind dictionary and picked allthe words that rhyme with eac other and put them in a sentence.
"all physical diminishes your contingence malicious
the sickness the entrance infectious hate delicious
when you taste the vengeance"
What the hell does that mean? And don't give me artisitc interpretation. Kudos for the track guys but seriously, if I were you I'd look at the words.
First and foremost, thanks a lot for the compliments and taking the time to review this. Rhyme dictionary? I don't think that even exists so I don't know where you got that from.
As for those lines that you pointed out well I talked to Burly since I don't want to get my interpretation of it mixed up with his actual meaning. Now remember that poetry in itself is hard to interpret because only the person that wrote it will completely understand but it's always interesting for the writer to see how other people interpret it, which is how we feel as well ;) According to Burly:
"all physical diminishes your contingence malicious
the sickness the entrance infectious hate delicious
when you taste the vengeance"
- means that you physically disappear becoming addicted to vengeance (vengeance here is the infection or sickness.) The word infectious in "infectious hate" is an adjective so it's like saying that the infectious hate is delicious when it tastes the vengeance if you want to be more literal.
A lot of people think they're going to enjoy getting revenge on someone but then regret it after doing it, in a sense it's similar to what Burly says but don't quote me on that.
We look at everything we write and make sure that we're not writing things that don't make sense so before you start questioning something, I would appreciate it if you would be less arrogant about it. Again, thanks a lot for the review so if you have anything else you're curious about, just PM me. Stay up.
~Ya boy DeX~
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